As my feelings danced
Come forward in waves, as friendship
Mounts the summit of a glistening mountain
And yet, increases far below
Under lights - across dance floors.
I walked back, dizzy in the dark,
Fell into my bed - spinning all the while,
For a matter of minutes I slept, then
You left (with big plans and a little emotion).
But I journeyed on with fresh faces,
Only time will tell if,
A feeling of emptiness will
Crush me ever so slightly... I journey still
Adam Thomas
Monday, 2 November 2009
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Beautiful and concise, the second stanza feels to me like an intimate look at a brief moment on your trip in Peru? The broad sweep of the first stanza encapsulates the minuteness of what follows well.
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